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Monday 19 October 2020

My Creative Writing

 Characters:Drake,Chris,Brown and Patrick 

When:1945

Where: In a park and in a forest 

What: RIng haunted Drake,Chris,Brown and Patrick 

Colour Grey,Black

Place:In a haunted castle


Ring Huanting 4 brothers

It was a dark lighting day4 brothers called Drake,Chris,Brown and Patrick walked in the forest in the dark. They were throwing rocks at the trees and that. But then we heard a noise. Suddenly a ghost called a ring popped out of a tree we ran so fast to our house. We locked all the doors in our house.


We saw the ring again our parents went on holiday. We were so scared we said to ourselves it is the ring haunting us. We all slept together. We all had goosebumps the next day our parents came home and the ring disappeared and the 4 brothers told their parents their story.