I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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My Creative Writing
Characters:Drake,Chris,Brown and Patrick
When:1945
Where: In a park and in a forest
What: RIng haunted Drake,Chris,Brown and Patrick
Colour Grey,Black
Place:In a haunted castle
Ring Huanting 4 brothers
It was a dark lighting day4 brothers called Drake,Chris,Brown and Patrick walked in the forest in the dark. They were throwing rocks at the trees and that. But then we heard a noise. Suddenly a ghost called a ring popped out of a tree we ran so fast to our house. We locked all the doors in our house.
We saw the ring again our parents went on holiday. We were so scared we said to ourselves it is the ring haunting us. We all slept together. We all had goosebumps the next day our parents came home and the ring disappeared and the 4 brothers told their parents their story.