I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Fsaafua, its me Jimmy I like your work on Collage On New Zealand Heroes And What They Have Archived keep up the great work and keep posting your great work on your blog.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Fafua,I wonder who is Jacinda Arder,you guys did well but next time proofread.
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Kia ora Fsaafua,
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