I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Faafua,you did a good job you just need to fix some spelling mistake,so you guys went swimming for 1 hour?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Faafua Ila and Karson I really am impressed with your work. Keep up the awesome work.
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DeleteHi Faafua, my names Te Wano I'm from Otaki college. I really enjoyed looking at your project, its really interesting, I would never had thought
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