I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi this is Karson and you should proof read what you write because when I was reading you poster on personal hygiene I saw that you should wash your hands in soup for 20 or 30 seconds and by the way GOOD JOB :)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi this is Karson and you should proof read what you write because when I was reading you poster on personal hygiene I saw that you should wash your hands in soup for 20 or 30 seconds and by the way GOOD JOB :)
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