I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka pai, good work on your book about the Titanic Faafua! I really enjoyed your acrostic poem as the words you chose for each letter were relevant. If you could go on a big cruise ship like the Titanic (without sinking!) where would you want to travel to?
Talofa Faafua, My name is Tu'amelie and I go to EHS. I really love your book and also learnt lots of facts of your book. I also liked how you put effort to your work and that was so entertaining and this is so cool to read. It looks like an actual book! Keep up the gook work and hope you have a good week!
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Ka pai, good work on your book about the Titanic Faafua! I really enjoyed your acrostic poem as the words you chose for each letter were relevant. If you could go on a big cruise ship like the Titanic (without sinking!) where would you want to travel to?
ReplyDeleteTalofa Faafua, My name is Tu'amelie and I go to EHS. I really love your book and also learnt lots of facts of your book. I also liked how you put effort to your work and that was so entertaining and this is so cool to read. It looks like an actual book! Keep up the gook work and hope you have a good week!
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