I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Faafua, Wow, what a fantastic word collage you have created using word generator. The spelling of heroes should be "heroes" and not heros. Please check your spelling always. I really like what you have said about heroes change the world. Keep up the awesome sharing.
Hello Faafua and Victoria, This is a brilliant word collage. Maybe next time you should go back to your work and check if your spelling is correct but your work was VERY interesting and great. Have you ever saved someone before? I like the quote you guys said " Changes the world into a better place" thats a strong meaning. I also love how you guys are working together like hard working and teamwork like it said on your word collage. Keep up the good work. -Ema from EHS Room Eleven.
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Hi Faafua,
ReplyDeleteWow, what a fantastic word collage you have created using word generator. The spelling of heroes should be "heroes" and not heros. Please check your spelling always.
I really like what you have said about heroes change the world. Keep up the awesome sharing.
Hello Faafua and Victoria,
ReplyDeleteThis is a brilliant word collage. Maybe next time you should go back to your work and check if your spelling is correct but your work was VERY interesting and great.
Have you ever saved someone before? I like the quote you guys said " Changes the world into a better place" thats a strong meaning.
I also love how you guys are working together like hard working and teamwork like it said on your word collage. Keep up the good work.
-Ema from EHS Room Eleven.
Hello Faafua and Victoria, this great word collage I like the most is the background but maybe next time proofread XD!.
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