I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Faafua this is Ila just wanting to say that your poster on kindness and caring is really nice it has a lot of details it tells a lot on why we should be kind and caring. nice work
Hi Faafua this is Tevita, I chose this post because you have done good and the ideas on kindness and caring are good because maybe one day someone will probably use these ideas on how to show kindness. My Question is in the red box the first 4 sentences should end with a full stop because you begging a new sentence.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Faafua this is Ila just wanting to say that your poster on kindness and caring is really nice it has a lot of details it tells a lot on why we should be kind and caring. nice work
ReplyDeleteHi Faafua this is Tevita, I chose this post because you have done good and the ideas on kindness and caring are good because maybe one day someone will probably use these ideas on how to show kindness. My Question is in the red box the first 4 sentences should end with a full stop because you begging a new sentence.
ReplyDeleteHi Faafua this is Neha. Your poster on kindness and caring is informative and the pictures are so cute. Keep working hard.
ReplyDeleteHello Faafua, Where dd you get all the infromation from and also I like the picture's you choose.
ReplyDeleteKai ora faafua this is Hesioni your class mate thank you for commenting on my blog i like your work on your poster good job :)
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