I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This is a solid read. Well Done. It is informative with excellent detail and does well to take the reader through the information easily. I note a couple of small punctuation errors but overall you should be proud of this publication. Great Work.
Kia ora Faafua, thank you for sharing your book about kiwi. Do remember to proofread your spelling and punctuation before you publish - you can always get a partner to check it for you too. I love how you used headings for each page and included extra information about its classification as a ratite. Ka pai!
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This is a solid read. Well Done. It is informative with excellent detail and does well to take the reader through the information easily. I note a couple of small punctuation errors but overall you should be proud of this publication. Great Work.
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DeleteKia ora Faafua, thank you for sharing your book about kiwi. Do remember to proofread your spelling and punctuation before you publish - you can always get a partner to check it for you too. I love how you used headings for each page and included extra information about its classification as a ratite. Ka pai!
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