I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Faafua it is Ila and I would like to say that I really liked your work you have done it is really interesting and it tells me a lot about the wall of china. I have one question do you wanna go to the wall of china?
Hi Faafua I so enjoyed reading your information slides on the Great wall of China - one of the wonders of the world. Good work. I will be looking forward to reading your blog posts over the holidays. Ka Pai.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Faafua it is Ila and I would like to say that I really liked your work you have done it is really interesting and it tells me a lot about the wall of china. I have one question do you wanna go to the wall of china?
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ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed reading your information slides on the Great wall of China - one of the wonders of the world. Good work. I will be looking forward to reading your blog posts over the holidays. Ka Pai.
Thank you Manpreet and Ila for commenting on my blog
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