I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo, this is your class mate Va'a and Jimmy we really like your poem on wellness but can you put the "i" to "I" also you should keep doing this and get better at writing other stuff so you get to achieve your goals and have a better life. :
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Malo, this is your class mate Va'a and Jimmy we really like your poem on wellness but can you put the "i" to "I" also you should keep doing this and get better at writing other stuff so you get to achieve your goals and have a better life.
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