I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Faafua, Olivia here from Otaki college.I really like your little presentation. The video is very inspirational. I like how you talked about kindness. it is very important.
Hi I am Harriet from Otaki College. I am a year 8. I really liked your blog post. It was inspirational. You also had very good puncuation and I liked how you gave reasons. It also teaches people that not all suer heoroes wear capes. Thanks for shari ng that with me. Harriet :)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Faafua, Olivia here from Otaki college.I really like your little presentation. The video is very inspirational. I like how you talked about kindness. it is very important.
ReplyDeleteHi I am Harriet from Otaki College. I am a year 8. I really liked your blog post. It was inspirational. You also had very good puncuation and I liked how you gave reasons. It also teaches people that not all suer heoroes wear capes. Thanks for shari ng that with me.
ReplyDeleteHarriet :)