I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Faafua, This is a very kind letter you have written. Thank you for your kind words but I don't agree with you on you saying that you were dumb.You were never dumb. You are very smart and that's why you are going up the level you need to be for a year 5. Well done Fua. Remember to check your writing Fua- use capital letters correctly and put a full stop at the right place. Also check your spelling. I will let you know about proofreading at our Google Meet tomorrow. Keep up the awesome learning.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Faafua,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very kind letter you have written. Thank you for your kind words but I don't agree with you on you saying that you were dumb.You were never dumb. You are very smart and that's why you are going up the level you need to be for a year 5. Well done Fua. Remember to check your writing Fua- use capital letters correctly and put a full stop at the right place. Also check your spelling. I will let you know about proofreading at our Google Meet tomorrow. Keep up the awesome learning.