I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Faafua, Thanks for sharing your summary on your blog. However, there are lots of errors in your sentences, make sure you proofread please before you publish your learning on your blog. Jacinda Ardern is not the president, she is the Prime Minister and she is not the only female(girl) to have become the prime minister of New Zealand. I will write a summary with you during our Google meet today. Keep up the awesome sharing.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Faafua,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your summary on your blog. However, there are lots of errors in your sentences, make sure you proofread please before you publish your learning on your blog. Jacinda Ardern is not the president, she is the Prime Minister and she is not the only female(girl) to have become the prime minister of New Zealand.
I will write a summary with you during our Google meet today.
Keep up the awesome sharing.