I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey Faafua, Its Josh from room 11 and I think that your writing is great on which is better sport or music? BTW you wanna know the funny thing is that on our writing test we used the same topic. Keep up the great work
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Fafua,I think both are important but music is kind of better,this a great work.
ReplyDeleteHey Faafua, Its Josh from room 11 and I think that your writing is great on which is better sport or music? BTW you wanna know the funny thing is that on our writing test we used the same topic. Keep up the great work
ReplyDeleteHi Faafua,
ReplyDeleteits me Jimmy I like your home work keep up the lovely work and don't forget to post your awesome work on your blog.