I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi my name Patrick I like how you made speech and how you are talking about Edmund Hillary and Jacinda ardern I like how you said it in a funny way it looks so good hope you get selected Bye
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi my name Patrick I like how you made speech and how you are talking about Edmund Hillary and Jacinda ardern I like how you said it in a funny way it looks so good hope you get selected Bye
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