I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Fua I so enjoyed reading your information report on lions. You know my son Zameer likes reading about animals and likes to find interesting facts about them. I will ask him to read your information report. It is awesome to see how you have used paragraphs in your information report. Next thing you could work on is clearly setting out your paragraphs and have pictures that clearly show what the paragraph is about. I will be looking forward to reading your blog posts over the holidays. Ka Pai.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Fua
ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed reading your information report on lions. You know my son Zameer likes reading about animals and likes to find interesting facts about them. I will ask him to read your information report.
It is awesome to see how you have used paragraphs in your information report. Next thing you could work on is clearly setting out your paragraphs and have pictures that clearly show what the paragraph is about. I will be looking forward to reading your blog posts over the holidays. Ka Pai.
Thank you manpreet for this comment I hope your zon likes all my information reportes
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